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Mirare

Ploua
Si fierbinta imi cazu
Un strop pe arsa pleoapa.

Soare
Il privesc si un bob rasfringe
Raza altor mii de sori.

Nori
Le vad mersul cum se duc
Grei de negura si ceata.

Iarba
Ce o calc cu talpa goala
Pare inca stravezie.

Ceruri
Intru-n vis si in mirare
Lacrimile lor le beau.
©2008-2009 *liviugherman
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publicata in Opinia, Iasi la data de 17-18, 02, 1996
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help. friends help me translate these verses correctly


Wonder

Rain
Hot and I fell
A drop in the burned eyelid.

Sun
You look and reflect a grain
Radius other thousand suns.

Clouds
I see them walking as they go
Heavy mist and fog.

Grass
What a naked foot calculation
Still appears transparent.

Heaven
View a dream and wonder
They drink their tears.

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:iconliviugherman:
multumesc de apreciere, da este un alt stil
:iconloneearthling:
nu mă prea pricep la scris, dar pentru mine e frumoasă, îmi place:)

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I'll be waiting...
:iconliviugherman:
multumesc tare mult de comentariu
:iconwaterdrup:
argh, still no clue ><

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“Do you worry about the climate change too?”
‘Yes, I find the change between summer and winter rather dreadful…’
:dummy:
I am the light and for you I will shine
Just be prepared for a hell of a ride
Don't ever die...
:iconliviugherman:
it s a type haiku poem
:iconwaterdrup:
yes, I see now ^^
will you translate it too?

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“Do you worry about the climate change too?”
‘Yes, I find the change between summer and winter rather dreadful…’
:dummy:
I am the light and for you I will shine
Just be prepared for a hell of a ride
Don't ever die...
:iconladycrimson:
Ma face sa ma gandesc la ce alte simturi mai are omenirea de descoperit...
:clap:

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I swim a sea of skin, afraid to drown in flesh...
:iconliviugherman:
da, cred ca specia umana este unica in a trai sentimente, fiind ele de orice natura

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