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Amindoi

Plingeau tacut catargele de lut
Peste un vast si plutitor mormint.
Unde se duc ? Cu sufletul infrint
O margine de orizont sarut.

Le spala prova spumele plingind
Si vintul sufla aurul amar
Al sinilor de fata ce-n zadar
Asteapta-n somn al mingiierii gind.

Pe punte, glasuri povestesc arar
Vechi intimplari. Cerneala spumei, clar,
Transcrie tot. Ca un pirat de plumb
M-asculta sobolanul calm si timp.

Vina furtuni cu fulgere si ploi !
Traim, pieptis, tristetea amindoi
©2008-2009 *liviugherman
:iconliviugherman:

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publicata in Opinia, Iasi la data de 6-7, 07, 1996
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help. friends help me translate these verses correctly




Both

Silent weeping masts clay
Floating over a vast and grave.
Where to go? The soul defeated
A kiss horizon edge.

Foams bow wash them crying
And the wind blew bitter gold
The breasts of the girl-n vain
Wait-n mingiierii thought of sleep.

On deck, voices rarely tell
Old story. Ink foam, clear,
Transcribe it. As a lead pirate
I listen to calm and for rat.

Vina lightning storm and rain!
We live, boldly, both of sadness

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:iconiacobvasile:
imi place mult, felicitari si tine-o tot asa
:iconliviugherman:
multumesc tare mult, dar tot timpul liber isi spune cuvintul, inspiratia si ...
:iconplouacuvisedetoamna:
hey...imi plac ambele poezii dar mai mult asta..e mai mult stilul meu asta...felicitari

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...As wicked as you are, you're beautiful to me
You're the darkest burning star, you're my perfect disease...
:iconliviugherman:
multumesc tare mult de apreciere, da aceasta poezie este in stil simbolist, cealalta e alt ceva
:iconplouacuvisedetoamna:
cu multa placere:)

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...As wicked as you are, you're beautiful to me
You're the darkest burning star, you're my perfect disease...
:iconwaterdrup:
:( can't read it! what's it about?

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“Do you worry about the climate change too?”
‘Yes, I find the change between summer and winter rather dreadful…’
:dummy:
I am the light and for you I will shine
Just be prepared for a hell of a ride
Don't ever die...
:iconliviugherman:
it is romantic and sad poem, i will translate it in english later
:iconwaterdrup:
oh great!

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“Do you worry about the climate change too?”
‘Yes, I find the change between summer and winter rather dreadful…’
:dummy:
I am the light and for you I will shine
Just be prepared for a hell of a ride
Don't ever die...

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